Banner photo of Larry Eugene Meredith, Patrick Flynn and Ronald Tipton, 2016.

The good times are memories
In the drinking of elder men...

-- Larry E.
Time II

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Commuters

COMMUTERS



They come and they go
Like traffic flow
Headlamps dissolving in moonlight
Moonlight dissolving with dawn
Momentary tick marks of the day
Seized upon or passed away.







Each week Monkey Man give a challenge to write a poem in 160 characters. Like writing a tweet – it takes some doing to convey thought in so few words. Come join the fun!  I discovered him on Moondustwriter's Blog. Please visit them both before time speeds away.


You can read more of my poetry at Old man and the Syllables or Blossom and Weeds.

3 comments:

Monkey Man said...

Took a while to find your Sunday 160. You have a number of blogs to offer. Thanks for playing along and hope to see you again. Leave a link if you can so your 160 will be easier to find (I'm not too bright and need all the help I can get)

Tamela's Place said...

Hey Lar..

That was a good little poem there.. I'm so long-winded.. when i write a poem it's usually alot longer tha 160 Characters.. But that is a good challenge.. I might have to visit with monkey man.. My last post that i just wrote was a poem i wrote years ago.

Tammy :)

Mama Zen said...

This is gorgeous!